Lost in Thought Cinematic Concept (read desc.)

(Youtube Video Below!)
Its just sketches, messy, some parts are downright impossible to understand, and I die a little inside every time I see it. BUT its here and what I have so far. Its not finished, and it would take a lot of TLC for me to make it work. But I want to know you want it before I do it. I'm but a single man, and its 174 pictures not counting variants. 
So please give it a look and tell me if you'd like to see it finished or if I should just start building the funeral pyre. 
Find it Here! www.youtube.com/watch?v=n74Ugq…